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New Body Part 1
My name is Theodore Davis, and I am 14 years old. Actually, why don't I start with how up until last night, I was a 34 year old man names Thomas Crane living in New York.
I slammed the now empty glass of beer down, the bartender telling me I was cut off for the night seeing as how I was absolutely wasted I was. I am not an unreasonable man, but someone had been making snide remarks about me and against my better judgement, I punched them right in the jaw before leaving the bar. It was a warm Friday night, and I took my time walking to my apartment, trying my best not to look dead drunk. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my neck and was just able to make out a man, and a needle before a sack was pulled over my head. That's when everything went black.
I woke up, feeling quite energetic, which struck me as odd because of my night of heavy drinking. "I SHOULD be hung over" I thought to myself.
I had only just noticed my surroundings. I was in a very modern style bedroom, definitely not my own. As I began to sit up in the bed, I looked down and saw my arms and chest. However, they were definitely not MY arms and chest. The boyish arms I now had were light and dusted with peach fuzz. "This can't be real" I said, even my voice was that of a young teenage boy.
I slowly continued pushing the blanket down and discovered a young chest devoid of any hair. I threw the blanket off my body and got up and out of the bed. I proceeded to walk over to the full body mirror on the other side of the room, but as I walked I felt an unfamiliar slightly swaying weight between my legs. I took a deep breath. I dared not look down. I walked over to the mirror and I gasped. Looking back at me was the most beautiful teen-boy I had ever seen. I looked to be about 5'5". As my eyes traveled down my new body, I noticed that that there was a nice 6-pack developing, and as my eyes traveled lower, I was left speechless. I was clad only in the tightest pair of snow white Hanes Briefs, and the mound underneath was by no means small. I took a deep shaky breath, closed my eyes and lowered the briefs down my coltish legs. Once I was completely naked, I quickly opened my eyes and was absolutely blown away. Suddenly the bulge made sense. In between my legs hung a completely soft, cut, 5.5 inch dick, with each testicle a little larger than a golf ball!
This sight was too much for my now teenaged brain to handle. My cock quickly began to inflate, all the way to a full thick 7.75 inches! My brain was now on auto pilot as I picked up my briefs and walked into the bathroom to get the lube hidden under the sink. How I did I know that was there? I laid back on my bed, squirted a generous amount into my hand, and began to work on my now painfully throbbing tool. I cupped the velvety sack of my balls with one hand and pumped my cock with the other. My eyes closed as a let out a series of quiet moans and hisses though my teeth, the heat building deep inside my groin. As my hand moved up and down the shaft, I felt just how big the helmet was, thicker than the rest of my shaft! I began to pump harder and faster, feeling the heat rise through my cock. I opened my eyes as I heard the wet noises of my slit starting to open, letting flow torrents of thick, clear liquid. I arched my back, my mouth agape and began to scream as I reached an absolutely intense climax. My cock that was just oozing precum began to jet powerful streams of hot creamy boy-juice, my hand, still on auto-pilot made the experience even more intense, as I continued more and more jets of cum fly out of me landing all the way from my nose down to my abdomen. I continue to work my cock until I'm empty. As I lay there my mind begins to catch up with the events that just unfolded.
Somehow, I now know exactly who I am and where I am. My name is Theodore Davis, yesterday was my 14th birthday, and this is my new home in Santa Monica, California where my mom and I had just moved to about 2 days ago. By the way, I think I'm gay and I like the name Teddy better.
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I know this chapter was short, but I just did not have a lot of time to write it! Don't worry, this is NOT a masturbation only story. I have plenty of plot planned out and updates will be as quick as I can get them out! Please email me any feedback you have, as well as what you thought of this first installment!